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You have summarized the book very well and there is not much that I can add in terms of how good the book is. But I felt it could have been edited a bit tightly, in the sense that towards the end, a couple of chapters did not contribute to the main story-line, which is actually about Sehmat. What information she brought in, was made clear earlier. But how that information was put to use, could have been done with in a few paragraphs. There was no need to add full two chapters to the narrative since it breaks the continuity. It takes your mind off the main character of whom you are reading! You, as a reader, are experiencing the turmoil and the mental anguish of this lady, what she is going through, what she is fighting within, the conflict of her conscience. And the writer abruptly changes tracks away from her! My advice to those who have started reading this, skip the 2 chapters(you'll know when you are there) and read on after that. You can come back to those chapters after you finish. It'll be more satisfying.Salute to the brave lady.
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